hesopchoie's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Love Springs Tragedy]

Summary

Not bad, with more practice you can be even better. This doesnt sound that bad. Maybe you should work on playing the same volume throughout. Good chord choices and the solo wasnt too bad.

Jaalave responds:

As I said to shanzerion923, I've only been playing guitar for about a year, about 1 to 6 hours a day. Thanks. I really liked how the solo went. I was amazed when I stopped and listened to it.

Quality sucks though, because I use a built in microphone to record my music. I am actually getting a really nice Austin electric with a flying whammy and an acoustic pedal, so that will help quality. I hope to get better. I was amazed to get 2 reviews within 10 minutes of posting it. Thanks guys. Hopefully you will like more of my music.

[Smooth Eskimo]

Summary

Its pretty good. Did you record the instruments or did you use a generater? I like the bass line around 1:30 mark. Good overall sound and texture. Keep it up.

Trevor-peaches responds:

I recorded all the instruments except the drums.
Thanks man :)

[**Moments of Inspiration**]

Great

Not your best work. The piano needs to change a bit, but thats all i can think of. Nice drums in there, they create a strong feel.

KTRECORDS responds:

This song is still a work in progress. I have an idea for maybe making a big change later in the song. I'm kind of tentative when it comes to changing it too much though. I'd hate to ruin the mood of the song that I already have going. I'm also lazy, lol. Glad you like it though!

-Jason
KTRECORDS

[.Wondering Air]

Summary

Its amazing how your first song is my second favorite song by you. You put alot work into this [I think] and it payed off. As you can tell by now I have reviewed EVERYONE OF YOUR SONGS and I feel accomplished. Good work on all of them. Keep it up.

Manhart responds:

Lol I didn't see that I got new reviews on my older songs :D
But thanks a lot man! Ye it is the first one I submitted on NG, but not the first one I ever made though . . .
Thank you for your reviews! :D

[.Carried Away]

Summary

Good, nice bells and synth. Overall good. The only problem I found was the drums were over used. [A common problem you have].

Manhart responds:

I'm just too lazy to make the drums change through the song ^^

[.Everything has an end]

Summary

Very nice, smooth, and calm song. It is great for background music [if you use it in flash]. I like the extra [Bells?] towards the end.

Manhart responds:

very calm yes :) would be great if any would use it for background music for anything :P
I actually forgot what kind of sound I used towards the end . . and I cannot find the FL file, so I cannot open it again :( it is just goooone waah ,. .

[.Gladness Piano ver.]

Summary

Once again good. I still like the other but this is good too. Infact, I liked it so much it is my favorite song. Good work again again.

Manhart responds:

Very late respons, I know that ^^
But thanks man! Your favourite song eh? AWESOME :D:D !!

[Skybridge]

Summary

I can hear the resemblance. Always good to have something to compare to. Maybe you could add accent percussion. If you dont know what that is, send me a message and ill explain it. Also, you could use a octave change to keep the repedative sound away.

Glaiel-Gamer responds:

there's a little percussion in the middle and it does change key but I didn't add a lot of percussion cause that takes away from it being calm

[Storm Approaching Loop]

Summary

Doesnt loop.....thats the point of a loop. This doesnt flow. The sounds arent too bad, but you could make the kick a little louder.

Kanel-Artwork responds:

yea, i noticed it as soon as i uploaded it.

sure, i'll try that....maybe (you didn't tell me why it should be louder..."proper" critique would be nice)

[Cobblers Delight]

Summary

Decent but nothing special. It is a song that could be made over and over by any artist. Very generic. Maybe next time you could add some real work instruments. It is not bad for what it is, but step it up next time.