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The bass seemed like it could have had more of a hit to is, but that is just my preference.

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I agree about the bass from the previous comment. I also felt that you should have changed the melody more. It kind of stuck with that same pattern and then the drums changed more lol.

TIMarbury responds:

thx for the honesty again... i think the pattern is 2 long and the song gets dragged out...but ya..

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The bass drum didnt really make too much bass. I think it would make it more epic to have strong percussion.

CaptinEpic responds:

there, i made it a little better

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I hope this is a joke...

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The bass hits were really weak and the background drums never changed.

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Very generic. It had hardly any changes. The melody just got more bland as you continued. Try to stray away from the basic hip hop tools and add more to you music.

diplomatikProduktion responds:

generic? okay ill improve just for u how about i make a remake to gay ass techno solider?

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This song is great. It has everything that I like and more. Bass hits that actually hit, epic melodies, good melody transitions, background beats that changed, and its loopable.

TIMarbury responds:

thanks for the support! got more to come :)

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Good transitions from melody to melody. Id add in some more of that piano you had at 2:08. Also, try to add more drum beat changes.

Keegoman responds:

Thanks man for the review but you gotta remember im not finished with it yet.

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Good job. If I made games I would probably use this. Its a good song/loop to put in the background that wouldnt intrude too much, but also have some listening value. The only problem I see is that it doesnt loop very well.

LolIShotU responds:

Thanks! I know it doesn't loop that well I didn't really plan that out as well as I should have. All in all thanks for the comment and I'm glad you like it!

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I wouldnt really consider this techno, but it is still a decent song. Good for your first.

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