hesopchoie's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Brand New Happy]

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Good job. If I made games I would probably use this. Its a good song/loop to put in the background that wouldnt intrude too much, but also have some listening value. The only problem I see is that it doesnt loop very well.

LolIShotU responds:

Thanks! I know it doesn't loop that well I didn't really plan that out as well as I should have. All in all thanks for the comment and I'm glad you like it!

[Welcome To Hell Kids]

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You should level the bells out more, they started to pierce. Also, you should have stuck with the original melody. The changes didnt really work together.

TheStopOfMotion responds:

Well, this was one of my first songs, so yeah...

[Come fly wiht me?]

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Id suggest not using that effect on your voice. It sounded better with it off. Also, the beat could have been a better choice.

juggaloallday responds:

Yea i know what you mean. I cant sing that great. so i have to edit it ya know...lol

Thanks for the review.....these are hard to come by these days.

[Big Red - Amen]

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You should really make more songs with length like this. 1 minute pisses me off because I like the song and then it is over too quick.

BigRed responds:

Will do, thanks :)

[Big Red - Mr Jones]

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This is pretty good. I like the story and the beat.

BigRed responds:

Thank ya!

[Flaming [ Horny ]]

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The bass was nice and felt like it actually went in right with the song. Not many people do it right. I like that it had good transitions and good melodies. Next time try to switch up the drums in the back. Good work.

shesmackshard responds:

thank you very much for the review :D yeah, I guess my focus was on all those effects on the drums haha. But yes, thank you for the input. Much appreciated.

[Spawn of Destiny]

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The beginning was very weird and off beat. Defore you respond remember that the whole thing is supposed to flow and make sense. There seems to be too much going on and has very bad leveling. The only good part I think is the use of guitar and the very beginning.

NinjaEskimo responds:

idk about off beat, ill check that out, but the bass prbly is a bit too much. thx anyway,.

[Traumatic Brain Injury]

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Good:
Variations of sounds and rhythms.
Good mix of 8bit and modern sounds
Nice accents and pauses

Improvements:
Very weak bass
Maybe change the melody or background and use that to introduce a different set of sounds

DubHead responds:

thanks, i love constructive comments like these, and i will soon fix the improvements :).

[A Little Jazz]

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I would like to tell you that I love jazz and I hope you make more and improve into a perfect jazz master :)

Good: The drums added texture and accents. The piano was not bad and was good for improve.

Bad: You should have had more power with that piano. Just find the rhythm and play stronger. It felt that the piano was more of a background instrument than a soloist. Also switch up the drums and bass a little. The bass could perhaps do a bass fill then a small solo and come back with a new rhythm.

roensb responds:

thank you for the review. I have jazz training on saxophone but im new to jazz piano. When i made this i really just wanted to throw up a quick background and improvise but i will think of the things you mentioned when i make another.

[Sunrise On the HillsideSongMix]

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If you added some small percussion it would really add effect and still keep it calm. The ending was not good though. The high note threw off the point of the song. Good work though. Maybe you could add a bass guitar instead a double bass symphony sound. It would make it clear and let you relax and not listen to the warp sound of too many low strings.

PivotedFlash responds:

I found percussion a little hard to incorporate, as it seemed to take away from the strings. I only used strings, no actual bass was used. Bass guitar sounded a little weird, but I'm going to continue to work on it, I uploaded this version for feedback.