hesopchoie's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Midnight Club]

Review

Nice work. You have a nice beat here. As always I will find fault in work so here we go!!! THE GOOD AND THE BAD
Good...
1. Very mighnighty if that is a word lol
2. Good melodies
3. As a symphonic bass player i love to hear orchestral sounds.
4. You kept a good rhythm and didn't mix odd percussion.
5. I liked the effect at the beginnings. The crackles.
6. I noticed the bass from ear to ear. Very nice.
Bad...
1. That bass overpowered. That is always a complaint for me. Not many people do it right. Takes perfections.
2. The ending was sorta weird. I don't think it fit the piece or gave it any justice.
3. The melody should never be the same deepness as the bass.
4. The drums didn't change enough. You shouldn't have them stand out as much if they repeated that much. It is ok if they change so that you notice it and they give a feel. Drums can either be for rhythm or for feel. Feel is loud and rhythm is soft. Remember that.

[Iced Tea Baby! {^}-{alix1}-{^}]

Review

I felt as if there was no real melody. Just a bunch of bass. Not bad for background. The problem is it doesn't really fit in anywhere. If it were a song then it would have a strong melody. If it were background music it wouldn't be full bass cause that distracts. I am in the middle here. I think you started to get somewhere after 1:30 but it shouldn't take that long to pick up. Also the melodies you did have just repeated too much. Same patterns throughout = lameness. Work on the bass problem and get more variety in your melodies.

alix1 responds:

lol. This is a Drum 'n BASS song. It is supposed to have lots and lots of bass!

[Cult Of Whisperers]

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The bass should be down a bit, it is much to powerful for the soft melody you use. Many people think that the bass makes the song but the melody does. If reduced the drums I might be able to hear the melody. At 1:19 the second bass just distorts EVERYTHING and I cant even hear the drums.

sculpted-cold responds:

lol k

[DJW_Cosmic Desires]

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I would like to start off by saying I am harsh, but correct. My opinions are based of fact and experience. First off, the bass has to be better. It is used in about 80% of techno songs. Change it up if you want to be better than everyone and get in the top 5. Next we get to the melody. It does nice transitions and the voices give a nice touch. Not many can add decent voices. Last would be the transitions/variety. You added some good effects here and there and then some decent transitions, but the ending took away from the transitions. I would say you did decent in the last part.

djwizzkid responds:

thanks man I like the pointers they will help alot

djw//..//

[Wyze - Warning shots]

Review

Nothing original. Just the same old "gangster" crap. It is good for what it is. Which is not much, the watered down category of modern "rap" which repeats like you. The beat was nice though, was that yours? My advice is try to level your voice and keep on beat. You don't flow very well in some spots, feels rushed. By the way I know music, I am a musician in all categories. I do not make all music but I know what is good and what isn't this is defiantly not great but not horrible. Now this is the part where you reply by saying, "Well, if this came from somebody who showed any musical inclination at all this might mean something."

Blasphem-E responds:

No it isn't where I say that whatsoever. See, you have many reviews and an actual song to your name, so your opinion counts :) . You are right in that this was rushed, and it definitely shows, hence why I've said I need to rerecord this. The beat was not mine though, it was by War-Spawn. Check him out if you haven't, he's got a lot of great beats.

Thanks for the review, and for all future reviewers: I'm only abusive to people who leave dumb reviews (i.e. don't comment on anything to do with the song just say it's shitty for no reason). Show a little respect like hesopchoie here did and it will go a long way.

[Looking For Blood]

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I like the mix of hip hop and classic. Im not sure you did your dynamics good though. There wasnt anything leveled lower or above the melody. Everything was very average. Maybe you could add some crescendos and decrescendos. I think the melody needs to stick out more too. The drum beat was WAY too loud. Overall it was decent.

[Happy Crunk]

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You used a good variety so it wasnt just a plain hip hop beat like everyone likes to do. You made a musical beat. That is good. Next time increase the length and maybe add a few real instruments.

C-Enterprise responds:

Will do ;)

[Attempted]

Review

Very nice. You kept transitions and layers going far. The background beat was nice and the melody had a good sound. I dont realy like how the melody stayed the EXACT same the entire way though. I felt as if you didnt put much work into the melody. You made it sound different by changing which instruments played and you sorta took the lazy way.

[Song of Storms remix]

Review

Good remix. I enjoyed this. It kept that Zelda feel and added a strong new feel. Good work. I think you could have toned down the symbols a little more and kept one melody at a time.

[Star Wars - To The Dark Side]

Review

Not too bad, but when i thought of the dark side I didn't really get any of this in my mind. I guess i expected evil sounds and deep drums. Not a bad song though.