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The melodies are good. If you could work on the bass this song would be great. Its the same all the way through and the bass hits last too long. By too long I mean each note extends too long.
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The melodies are good. If you could work on the bass this song would be great. Its the same all the way through and the bass hits last too long. By too long I mean each note extends too long.
Thanks for the input hesopchoi. Hrm... I'll fiddle with it this evening and see how it sounds. Good comment btw. Not many people actually give me things to work on, they just either say it was good or it was bad (but still at least their giving a comment I guess).
Thanks a lot!
Draden
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You should a decent variety. Id say add more in there. Maybe a bass drop, additional back beat, make it longer, some creative melodies, anything that makes it interesting. Good job with the voice sample too. Maybe add that in there some more, or find some other samples that fit the name.
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It wasnt bad I actually liked it, Id just suggest to make the intro a little shorter and add some of those sounds to the part where the bass kicks in.
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Id suggest changing the melodies instrument, the octave that its in, or the notes. (im talking about the harpsichord) Good Job though. Id make the bass a little deeper though.
so you're saying its too high in the octave or are you suggesting a different instrument all together? anyways thanks for the good review
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I can tell you know how to make music. Now you have to improve on your style. Everything was just there. There was no dynamics or emotion. Good job on the composition though.
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Slow it down a bit and if you dont then reduce some of the bass. I liked the first melody. Good job.
hmm, i actually haven't given that a try.
i think it will sound better slower,
thanks for the review!
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It seemed like you had a few melodies going. You should make sure everything compliments eachother instead of trying to lead. At 1:15 i liked what you started to do though. Good job.
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The voice was good. Id add some more clips though to make it more "exciting." I felt that bass melody wasnt constructed right. And the back beat was a little weak.
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The intro was pretty bad. Try to build it up some more. Id say turn down the bass hits and make the actual bass melody produce more bass.
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This was a decent song. It isnt dub step though.
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