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Nice work with the mellow mood and the bass. I would like to have heard a small melody added durring a break. Other than that, good job.
Good
Nice work with the mellow mood and the bass. I would like to have heard a small melody added durring a break. Other than that, good job.
Thanks for the input :)
Good
I loved the rythme and the melody throughout the whole song. This reminds me of an updated 80's song. I will be sure to watch your work. Good job.
Thanks! Be sure to keep check up mah news!
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The bass was doing something to my heart. What did you do to it? I like it though. Next time you could worked with the bass to keep a smooth rythme. It seemed like in some parts it changed from what it was doing. Good work though.
To me the bassline is midway between groove and melody, so I'd rather have it a bit melodical and grooving at the same time, in my eyes better than a normal offbeat bass.
Thanks for the review hesopchoie
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The kicks and guitar were perfectly leveled if you ask me. You could have added a drum line to make it sound more like a march. The kicks could have been replaced with a bass drum or tuba to also add to the march feel. Good work.
Thanks man, glad you liked it. I now added a drumline at parts. they're not much, but I think it sounds better :)
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Good sounds, but none of them fit together. It sounds like you just put them in random spots.
i guess i made a few mistakes.
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The synth all fit together nice and the kick wasnt too strong. Good work. There was no problem from what I saw.
I'm glad that you like it. This is just the beginning, as I said before. I'm mastering trance now, and I won't stop. I started it a few months ago, but I guess I'm doing fine.
Thanks for the review. :)
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Good transitions and quality. I like this piece and how it all went together smoothly. The drop from the fast to the slow at the end was good because it still had room to layer back up. Maybe next time try to do something better with the bass. It didnt seem to have a good position.
yea, i really didnt think the bass was that super great...i honestly got lazy on that part, but other than that im glad you felt the transitions were smooth. I was a bit concerned about that. but yea, i will definitely work on the bass next time.
thanks for the review!
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The piano was soft yet strong in passion. I liked how you dropped in the stronger bass line to create a stronger support for the new effects. [Maybe it was by accident lol]. The only problem I saw was that the melody doesnt change too often. Another piano to make a duet would sound great.
It was by accident lol!
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Nice rythme and the bass wasnt too overpowering which let you concentrate on the melody. I like the sound choice for the melody too. One thing you could have added was a small drum line in the back to make it a bit upy. Good job.
Thanks for the review. I had a drumline but I removed it, because i wanted this song to be more peaceful, and allow you to relax
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It was good if you like it but its not my style of song. Good work.
Understandable! Not everyone will be impressed by this, but at least you took the time to express your opinion. I respect you for that.
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