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    I can hear the resemblance. Always good to have something to compare to. Maybe you could add accent percussion. If you dont know what that is, send me a message and ill explain it. Also, you could use a octave change to keep the repedative sound away.

    Glaiel-Gamer responds:

    there's a little percussion in the middle and it does change key but I didn't add a lot of percussion cause that takes away from it being calm

    Wow

    Next time make the song. Dont use garage band. It is just a bunch of work already created. If you made this with absolutely NO LOOPS, then send me a message and I will appologize but come on.

    netty-swobb responds:

    I use Fl studio, No loops at all. All entirely my work.

    agfgf

    I didnt feel the story in that song. It just seemed like a futureistic walking song. Nice try though. Next time make a strong melody so that it can carry the feeling.

    DJ-Drym responds:

    I'm still a beginner in music making. And I'm experimenting different Sytrus generators. If there is written "EXPERIMENT" in info, then it is experiment. And I've only studied like 2.5 months only, 5-15 hours per week. But yeah thanks for the review, I'll try to find a better melody next time!

    DJ-Drym

    Good

    Commenting on ther person bellow me, I dont think it was the bass drum overpowering, it was the rest not realy having a main piece to be the strength, so the bass took over. Nice work. Remember that the atmosphere of a song isnt everything in ambient.

    Soundshifter responds:

    thanks

    Good

    Maybe add a little more rythme in there and make the bass more frequent. I like the production but it still needed work overall.

    Smidly responds:

    Good idea so tanks

    Good

    I think that expierement didnt turn out too badly lol. The piano should have been a little softer though. Around 1:15 and on it sounded great. The drums sounded a little weird, I am not sure what it was. The Baoque was great. You should make a song just in that style. Nice work, keep it up.

    Ephersand responds:

    Thanks very much for the critique, I'll try harder with my drum sound next time. Heavy piano is a habit I find difficult to shake. As for the track based entirely on Baroque ask and thou shalt receive, I've just written one and am about to submit it.

    Great

    Like I have said in your old work, your instruments need to be leveled. The rythme isnt very set on one level. I like the drummers work in this song. Maybe you could have the brass do more than just a few accent notes here and there. Good work though. Also make the brass be louder they seem very......weak [at points they are good].

    HyruleanHyroe responds:

    Thanks for the suggestions, hesopchoie! It's a good thing we haven't mastered it yet, which is part of why I put the rough one up. We'll take a look at it next time we're at the studio. :)

    GREAT

    I love this. The drums arent old and over used like the rest of the songs. The synth is great and changes alot. Overall great. I would suggest making this into a song instead of a loop. Also make a few drum crazes. By that I mean just let the drums do mini solos. The looping isnt very good. A dead silence isnt a very good way to end. Nice song though.

    Stataen responds:

    Thanks for the review! I will take your suggestions and advice. I know I screwed up at the end because I made a mistake on the program loop. Thanks again!

    Good

    I hate this song but what you did was good. Make sure you never put in the words lol. The bass line realy added power behind the piano. I see alot of solo piano songs that could have been better with rythme. Everything collarborated very nice. Keep it up.

    MarkySpark responds:

    Ok, I promise never to sing it.

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