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Someone should definitely make short video with this song.
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Someone should definitely make short video with this song.
I vote you.
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Try to make the bass more interesting. Decent overall though. Oh btw it doesnt loop very well. Id suggest just making it into a song its already 2 minutes.
yep that's my intention, im making it right now
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Id suggest adding more to the bass lines, making them louder, or making them deeper. A combination of all them would be good and add variety to your song. Good job though.
working on it
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The intro didnt seem smooth enough. When the bass came in it didnt seem right. Other than that, it was pretty good.
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The intro needs some work. Id suggest taking out that whole bass thing and cutting straight to the guitar. When you get to 1:00 add some filthy bass. Also work on a consistent drum line and chill out with the hi hats lol.
thanks for your input :)
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What are you doing? You had an epic noise and then you missed your drop into the wobble. This is dubstep to a point. You have to structure your stuff better.
You really can't be more wrong. Dubstep has nothing to do with a drop as much as it has to do with wobble. These are things that are common but there is dubstep out there that never drops and never wobbles. Dubstep is in the beat, plain and simple. Normally I would drop it and wobble it but, in case you forgot to read the description, I was trying to experiment. Thanks for the input though, I now realize that there is no room for creativity in dubstep and that all my songs need to drop and need to have wobble so I don't get called out by kids on Newground.
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You need an intro.
I made this back when I was getting used to producing Dubstep. Thanks for the Review.
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The melodies are good. If you could work on the bass this song would be great. Its the same all the way through and the bass hits last too long. By too long I mean each note extends too long.
Thanks for the input hesopchoi. Hrm... I'll fiddle with it this evening and see how it sounds. Good comment btw. Not many people actually give me things to work on, they just either say it was good or it was bad (but still at least their giving a comment I guess).
Thanks a lot!
Draden
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Id suggest changing the melodies instrument, the octave that its in, or the notes. (im talking about the harpsichord) Good Job though. Id make the bass a little deeper though.
so you're saying its too high in the octave or are you suggesting a different instrument all together? anyways thanks for the good review
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