hesopchoie's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Terrorists]

Review

It felt like you were using the vocals as a melody and it didnt work out too well. Good background. (bass, percussion and hits)

SourPuddle responds:

You probably didn't make it to the saxophone part? Thanks man.

[HW - Fever]

Review

You should try to use the bass to work with the melody some more. You did it at certain points, but I think you could make the song more intense.

haywirehaywire responds:

Im not sure what your talking about cause the bass always follows the melody..... thanks for the review anyway.

[TI:.Requiem 4 Dreamz [RM]]

Review

It seemed a little slow.

TIMarbury responds:

the original version is even slower :x. i actually increased the tempo as the song progressed alittle bit. thx for the review.

[{sPhly} - Reason RMX [WIP]]

Review

Good job with the vocals, not many songs use them and I commend you for trying to improve yourself. Id suggest trying to make them go together more. Its more than just having the vocals stay on beat. Have them work off of each other.

Shoephly responds:

Thanks you for being the first to write something :)

And yea, you're definetly right, out of the 3 minute original vocal I only used the first verse (approx 1min), and in that sence. And I started with the kinda climactic part of the original song as my begining.
But thanks for giving me a lil more faith on that I atleast got the vocals on beat, since I was struggling with that for such a long time as well as trying to make it a little orginal having the vocals stutter.

Looks like I just have to rethink a little on the composition. :)

-shoephly

[TI:.Intense Beauty]

Review

I agree about the bass from the previous comment. I also felt that you should have changed the melody more. It kind of stuck with that same pattern and then the drums changed more lol.

TIMarbury responds:

thx for the honesty again... i think the pattern is 2 long and the song gets dragged out...but ya..

[An Epic Adventure]

Review

The bass drum didnt really make too much bass. I think it would make it more epic to have strong percussion.

CaptinEpic responds:

there, i made it a little better

[Trapperz]

Review

Very generic. It had hardly any changes. The melody just got more bland as you continued. Try to stray away from the basic hip hop tools and add more to you music.

diplomatikProduktion responds:

generic? okay ill improve just for u how about i make a remake to gay ass techno solider?

[TI:.Vital Victory]

Review

This song is great. It has everything that I like and more. Bass hits that actually hit, epic melodies, good melody transitions, background beats that changed, and its loopable.

TIMarbury responds:

thanks for the support! got more to come :)

[Almostdonedemo2]

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Good transitions from melody to melody. Id add in some more of that piano you had at 2:08. Also, try to add more drum beat changes.

Keegoman responds:

Thanks man for the review but you gotta remember im not finished with it yet.