hesopchoie's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Professor M.E. Theme]

Good

Did you make up that character and theme song? The texture is nice in this piece good work.

K-Lynnette responds:

I made up the theme, but the character is property of my best friend.
and thank you ^ ^

[Operation: Deep November]

Great

I loved it. I also checked out your myspace and added you. Don't forget to upload on here so you can be heard from everywhere. The only problem I saw was that the drums you made where very repedative and didnt change very much. Good job though.

PenguinBomb responds:

thanks man!! I should start uploading here more, tis a great way to spread the music around. And yeah kinda right about the drums, I'm no drummer X.X, but eventually I'll probably get the sequencing a bit more realistic.

thnx for the review and for the add!!
-PB

[Pirate Accordian]

Good

This would work perfect for a credits, options, or title screen. Maybe you could add a little bass drum line that would make it feel stronger.

Ephersand responds:

Yeah some percussion would really give it more pizzaz. I'll work on it, unfortunately I don't really know what style pirate drummers use?!? But thanks for the critique.

[Guitar Glitch]

Good

It is good, but very....weak. Everything is on the same level. The bass needs to be a bass drum or kick because you dont get a kick feeling from it. It just sounds like another drum. Also make the guitar louder than the rest of it and maybe make some highlighted notes.

Torosyan responds:

thanks as well, i needed advice form people how to improve this when it was around GCSE times, you would be the 1st person to give constructive critisium (Y) thanks =D.

lolz but ill keep trying to improve it (not for the sake of the GCSE's but for newgrounds).

also take into consideration i know next to nothing about guitars. and im just your average grade 5 drummer.

[Your my best friend teddy...]

Good

You realized that you could have saved your work right lol. You should have incorperated some sort of star trek into. That would be great. My only complaint is that if you want this to be a decent loop it should loop better. It is in more of a song set.

Sulfur-Ram responds:

All songs I made are using the FL demo...
and made on a crappy computer :P

I'll buy FL studios when I get my headphone jack in my laptop fixed..

[SIDCHIP - 37 Views of Fujiwara]

Good

I could imagine this used in an old timey type of flash. It should have some sort of rythme that you can feel. What was with that random change at the end? You should have switched between those two COMPLETELY. That should have been the main part. And you need to work on your trasitions.

SIDchip responds:

Thanks for your comments hesopchole,

Seems like this kind of thing isn't your cup of tea, not to worry.

This piece is an exercise in losing the downbeat so to have put a breakbeat or something in there to emphasize the beat would have been good but quite boring and predictable for me. I forgot I left the second movement in there so thanks for reminding me. I'll perhaps take that bit out and submit it on its own.

Abrupt changes are the best if you ask me.

I'll admit this one is an all around outcast in the popular musical world. It is a musical representation of a Sudoku by the way.

Cheers again,
Sid

[Forth Comming]

Good

Very good work. The problem that took one point off was that some of the techno didnt blend well. Keep it up.

stickmaster1782 responds:

KK. Thanks! I just try to put some techo in almost every song that i make!

[Enter the Portal]

Good

I loved it. Nice loops and it all blended nice. I just could have it in myself to give you a ten with all of those dead pauses in very bad spots sorry.

stickmaster1782 responds:

Well, I wuz rushing to something to put in the middle, but I didn't! So I made my own which I screwed up really bad!

[Secret Agent: R.O.C.K]

Good

Very nice use of sounds. I liked how it wasnt solely bass [although I love bass] and you switched it up. I think the second and third melodies were a tad bit too low. They seemed like they would be used as a background. Maybe next time you could make them louder or higher up. Good job.

stickmaster1782 responds:

Yeah, I don't really like songs that only has one type of music. Also, melodies where suppose to be low. Thats just how they were.